Starts very well and then peters out a bit. A lot more could be said about certain areas - camera, editing, costume, lighting, actors...From about slide 30 on it's too brief. Also, aim for 3 examples for each point to prove it's common (i.e. a convention) Finish with a conclusive run down of indie/alternative conventions C+
Starts very well and then peters out a bit. A lot more could be said about certain areas - camera, editing, costume, lighting, actors...
ReplyDeleteFrom about slide 30 on it's too brief. Also, aim for 3 examples for each point to prove it's common (i.e. a convention)
Finish with a conclusive run down of indie/alternative conventions
C+